Yeay, gw bisa posting lagi! Thx escape, warnet kesayangan gw yang sejuuukkk...
Yah, tadinya gw mw posting tentang rencana ganti header, cuma berhubung tmn gw yang punya gambarnya lupa bwa kabel data wae ya.. Gajadi.
Anyway, gw cuma bisa posting puisi lagi. Gw emang lagi full of inspiration sih... ENJOY
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Two
-Opus 1. Before the After-
At first, there were two
One is me, one is her
I am me, and she is her
We are interconnected, feeling content
I'm in mine, and she in hers
No correlation, no causality
I'm one of us, she's one of them
And there's this emptiness
We're happy, not sad
We're not sad, not sad at all
In fact it was really fine
Interlocale connection PERFECT
-Opus 2. After the Before-
And then, there's still two
Something has changes, something hasn't
One is still me, the other is still her
But i am me, for she is her
If she is not her, i am not me
But if i am not me, she'll still be her
Confusing, yet clear. Painful, yet addictive
Sad, yet filled with happiness
There is no us, no there isn't
I'm not one of us, she's still one of them
Now, it's still two
Something has changes, something hasn't
There's still me, there's still her
And then, there's this void
Awkward, yet tempting. Dark, yet full of hope
It's sad, it's really sad
Yet here i am, trying to close the void
Wishing to travel to hers, but not becoming one of them
We're not happy, yet we're perfectly fine
Locale connection IMPERFECT
.
Yet
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Well, gua pikir makin lama gw makin berkembang, hha~
Thx to : Kubo tite 4 inspiring me...
Oh yeah, about this one. Well, it's all me, it's what i do best, haha...
Regards,
H-FiZ
gw suka puisinya....
jadi iri.. soalnya gw kagak bisa nulis puisi,,,
btw gw suka pas ada kata2 perfect...
kenapa??
krn itu judullagunya simple plan..
ssshhhaaaahhh
apa yg membuat lw mengambil inspirasi dari tite kubo ? pingin tau ~
wow
irony, ya?
wa juga demen, tuh (irony)
manteb, fizh
terutama bagian keduanya (After the Before)
buseeeeeeeet
itu puisi cinta ? ? ?
ato pelajaran logika matematika ? ? ?
sumpah mirip . . .
hehehehehehe . . .
keren puisinya...
haha~
keep posting....
@qent
Tulis aja, nanti juga makin bagus lama2, puisi gw sebelon2nya kan ancur
@fadel
Liat yg vol 8 ato 9??
@male
Irony gimana??
@Dhiel
Diemah, mau gua kasi soal beneran??
@mond
Makasi makasi...
weeeewww..
puisinya baguss..
keep writing..
kali aja bisa bikin buku sendiri khusus puisi2 ciptaanya H-fiz
Irony dari:
"...
Confusing, yet clear. Painful, yet addictive
Sad, yet filled with happiness
...
Awkward, yet tempting. Dark, yet full of hope
..."
nice
masalahnya udah beres, belom, fizh?
hwaa... gw tuh iri bgt sama lw deh... gimana caranya gw bisa punya otak sepinter lw. itu COMPLIMENT loh!! hehee... :)